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Aug 10·edited Aug 10Liked by Remus Noronha

I reread the first chapter and liked it as much as ever. I wanted to refresh my memory before delving into the next.

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Remus, I delighted in this story. My guess is that you've read Conan Doyle's Sherlock Holmes, but if you haven't, your story has some of the same suprise qualities that he so brilliantly uses with Mr. Holmes. Thank you for writing this.

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Thank you so much! I am a big fan of the Sherlock Holmes stories and this comment absolutely made my day!

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Ok, I'm hooked. This main character looks absolutely awesome!!

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Process note: I swapped the title of this chapter with what used to be the overall title of the story.

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